tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1913440299679310512.post6799765279251650573..comments2023-06-07T08:01:33.887-04:00Comments on the lighthouse: 12 short stories, the thirdTesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1913440299679310512.post-35235857218992228742017-04-13T12:14:56.264-04:002017-04-13T12:14:56.264-04:00Horrors! That is absolutely true.Horrors! That is absolutely true.Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1913440299679310512.post-6668372819017189712017-04-13T12:06:27.418-04:002017-04-13T12:06:27.418-04:00I think it could work as either a stand-alone piec...I think it could work as either a stand-alone piece or as part of a longer story. Better to leave the reader wanting a little more than to have them feel they've read too much! K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1913440299679310512.post-7356100087144364222017-04-13T11:09:55.974-04:002017-04-13T11:09:55.974-04:00I wondered what you would think of this. It's ...I wondered what you would think of this. It's not properly horror, but if you think you'd like to have written it, I shall feel greatly complimented. Thank you!<br />According to the rules, it's meant to stand as a complete story on its own, but I do know it feels unresolved and that there must be more to it. Perhaps I did not complete the brief, but there's another opportunity next month.Tesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09858653306179033669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1913440299679310512.post-37419865376567574982017-04-13T09:39:13.072-04:002017-04-13T09:39:13.072-04:00I wish I'd written this. Looks like chapter on...I wish I'd written this. Looks like chapter one for a great novel.K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.com